<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">3月第2期作业</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 这学期开学第一课——诗趣略说。梁老师从几个方面讲了“如何表现诗趣”的创作手法。为了巩固学习效果，学以致用。今年开始，我们就把这几个写法分解在8个月中进行一一练习。3月练习“词、句颠倒”的写作手法。即词序颠倒、句子颠倒。颠倒，有时是为了格律的需要，更多的是让一首诗变得生动有趣起来。这次作业要求一首诗里有一个词颠倒或者一个句子颠倒，或者两者皆有都行。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">题目自拟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">体裁：律、绝皆可。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1.商怀祯</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">螳臂挡车</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">奋力挡车双臂残，挡车义举被讹传。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">斯时车上卧衙吏，不问车前民喊冤。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2.刘治</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春景</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云霭半山幽，田园尽绿稠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">萤飞啄燕子，水静绕白鸥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">锄豆云追月，垂轮水横舟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">薄酬劳作苦，厚禄赋闲悠。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">3.茅竹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">石林</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨雪塑形突兀群，龙宫凝淀巨石身。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">高低疏密疑为树，绿叶无踪敢叫林。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4.李萍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">河岸春趣</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">桨破琉璃翠影移，廊桥引步上春堤。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">云垂柳线钩波皱，棋落川光点雨溪。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">几处欢歌情自醉，一番胜景趣犹迷。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">心怡乐向芬芳路，妙境深藏艳蕊畦</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5.苏雪琴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">放风筝</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三月踏春行，相携有惠风。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">人闲游柳岸，目远入云筝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">摇曳蓝天悦，往来碧水融。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心飞千里外，一线总关情。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6.梁文辉</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">迎郭占武代表回村</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">甩开筇杖笑出门，十里杏花迎贵人。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">南亩缘何苗更绿？春风落户俺们村。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7.朱信言</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春日</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">一夜东风百蕊发，争奇斗艳遍天涯。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">媚娘无恙惊回首，辞镜朱颜谢树花。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8.孙宝玲</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">桃花</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">三月春风暖色新，迎来姣蕊亮红唇。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">蝶飞粉面妆羞瓣，别样桃花映醉人。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9.李爱琴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">游常宁宫</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">蒋家别墅大豪宅，寻韵踏歌诗友来。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">惊望秦山残雪在，醉眸滟滟百花开。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10.张生效</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春苑遊题</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">暇日穿红绿，上林迎旭行。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹直挺骨劲，花艳拭睛明。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夙志巍石励，尘心碧水清。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">重将思绪理，迅步化龙钟。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11.何顺永</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">赏春</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">桃枝映水水流东，柳岸垂丝丝钓风。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">旭旭暖阳拂大地，心仪美景乐其中。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">12.牛英茹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">《二泉映月》有感</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">又是一年春到此，弯弯石径手扶竹。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">悠悠泉水寒和暑，淡淡蟾光有若无。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">春夏秋冬能几度？东西南北影孤独。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">琴声有泪泪难尽，月映双泉泉也呜。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">13.美霞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">农家小院</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">李杏露香腮，春光满院来。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柴门关不住，蜂仔越墙嗨。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">14.王寿礼</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春游</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">小鹊迎枝倍可亲，娇声婉啭逗天真。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">桃花浅笑方惊梦，溪水深情已醉晨。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨洗长空清气满，歌飞大野妙香频。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">桑农最懂今时好，扶日撑犁绘彩春。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">15.韩公元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">大佛寺拜佛</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">曾为王子位极尊，不恋荣华悯苦贫。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">目睿皆识天下事，心慈广渡世间人。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">16.左红艳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">辛夷花</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">一缕幽香沁腹来，随蝶步苑见兰开。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">红妆锦簇如星灿，玉面晶莹似雪白。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">静艳清新尘不染，端庄高雅骨难歪。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">何须再待百花闹，两树已装春满怀。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">17赵华</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">乡情</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">水推风动浪拍锚，明月出湖欲上梢。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">梦想撑帆寻望眼，谁知水比梦还遥。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">18.李群</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春天来了</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">一夜山河染色新，软风微雨唤良辰。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">穿廊紫燕殷勤语，翘首顽童嬉笑跟。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">前院杏花非淡定，后街桃蕊似天真。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">物华织入遐思梦，夙愿薄发只待春。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">19.王彦飞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">迁居高楼有作</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">南山遥睇隐烟鬟，大厦凌空接昊乾。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">快意开窗天尺五，裁云作纸写流年。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">20.刘颖</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">梅园见真情</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">暖阳柔处影梅林，母唱红歌子送馨。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">兴尽搀扶相伴去，霞般和煦感吾心。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">21.燕小君</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春日有感</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">新燕伴春回，清波漾翠微。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">垂丝千柳舞，落蕊万香飞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨露滋芳野，诗情叩暮晖。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心随云影远，沉醉不思归。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">22.张陕乐</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春榆</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">阳春三月雨悠扬，堤岸双榆诗韵长。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">忆起儿时欢乐事，钱钱入口味甘香。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">23.刘文轩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">湖岸春色</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">春暖花开三月天，莺歌燕舞逗人玩。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">一舟激荡廊桥影，五友健身魔掌拳。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">24. 曹恒 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春寒</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">方迎燕剪春，怎知花罩尘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一夜寒风吼，细柳扰凡心。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">25.南素华</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">沙尘袭春分</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">沙尘夜袭关中地，和暖春分瞬变寒。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">桃李虽觉折几许，菜花却绘艳南原。</span></p> <p class="ql-block">审核:梁文辉 李群</p><p class="ql-block">组稿:李群</p><p class="ql-block">整理制作:王彦飞</p><p class="ql-block">图片来自网络</p><p class="ql-block">咸阳市老年书画诗词学会诗词部</p><p class="ql-block">2025. 3. 28</p>