<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 特别声明：【芳草园】联对集锦成刊，均已得到参与成员的授权。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/42i5zs47" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:20px;">【芳草园】 联对集锦组稿成员主页链接</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">3月21日精彩出句：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蕉圃蛩鸣哀唤雨 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜阑桐雨叩窗脆 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求一醉红尘忘 (问天)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蕉圃蛩鸣哀唤雨 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹篱萤舞静迎风（学荣）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜阑桐雨叩窗脆 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晨晓菊香入室幽（学荣）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求一醉红尘忘 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">唯愿半醒绿蚁知（学荣）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蕉圃蛩鸣哀唤雨（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">梅林鹤舞傲凌风（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜阑桐雨叩窗脆（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">灯暗茶烟绕室幽（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求一醉红尘忘（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">何苦千愁白发衰（琢玉）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蕉圃蛩鸣哀唤雨（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">梅林鹊语喜迎春（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜阑桐雨叩窗脆（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晨寂荷珠滚叶圆（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求一醉红尘忘（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">唯盼重逢旧梦温（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蕉圃蛩鸣哀唤雨 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花堤蝶舞乐迎风（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜阑桐雨叩窗脆 (问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晨晓竹风拂院香（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求一醉红尘忘 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">岂管相逢白发飘（淡定）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蕉圃蛩鸣哀唤雨（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">烟汀雁唳怅惊秋（愚夫）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜阑桐雨叩窗脆（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">烛暗秋风侵案凉（愚夫）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求一醉红尘忘（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">且愿三吟陋室清（愚夫）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蕉圃蛩鸣哀唤雨 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">梅园燕舞乐临风（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜阑桐雨叩窗脆 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清晓竹风入院幽（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求一醉红尘忘 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">好把余生琐事抛（若水）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蕉圃蛩鸣哀唤雨 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">荷塘蛙鼓喜迎云（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜阑桐雨叩窗脆 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晨煦荷风拂岸悠（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求一醉红尘忘 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">不惜余生利柄丢（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蕉圃蛩鸣哀唤雨 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹林莺飞喜乘风 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜阑桐雨叩窗脆 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风冷烛苗照案昏 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求一醉红尘忘 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">却梦同舟瀚海游 (青丝羽衣)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蕉圃蛩鸣哀唤雨 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋林叶落漫迎风 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜阑桐雨叩窗脆 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">漏尽竹风摇梦轻 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求一醉红尘忘 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">偏向三秋霜月逢 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蕉圃蛩鸣哀唤雨（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花园蝶舞喜迎风（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜阑桐雨叩窗脆（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">更静山风扫院轻（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求一醉红尘忘（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">便把三生俗事抛（大海）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蕉圃蛩鸣哀唤雨（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹篱萤散恐生风（老农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜阑桐雨叩窗脆（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晨起松风拂案清（老农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求一醉红尘忘（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">且任七情俗世消（老农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蕉圃蛩鸣哀唤雨（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳堤燕舞巧裁风（Ang.zq）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜阑桐雨叩窗脆（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月落竹风抚槛柔（Ang.zq）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求一醉红尘忘（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">只愿半醒浊世清（Ang.zq）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蕉圃蛩鸣哀唤雨（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">桐林鸟舞苦逢霜（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜阑桐雨叩窗脆（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">烛暗酒香催客眠（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求一醉红尘忘（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">可解千愁爽气盈（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蕉圃蛩鸣哀唤雨 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">荷塘月出苦悲风（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜阑桐雨叩窗脆 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋晚荷风落笔香（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求一醉红尘忘 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">那管重逢绿鬓疏（梧桐）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蕉圃蛩鸣哀唤雨（问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野塘荷瘦怯迎秋（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜阑桐雨叩窗脆 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋暮西风侵枕凉（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求一醉红尘忘 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">从此相欢绿野居（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>蕉圃蛩鸣哀唤雨（问天） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹斋琴语淡涵秋（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜阑桐雨叩窗脆（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">霜重竹风绕径凉（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求一醉红尘忘（问天） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">犹喜孤吟白首休（文心）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蕉圃蛩鸣哀唤雨（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">松亭鹤舞醉迎风 (听花无语)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜阑桐雨叩窗脆（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">灯暗桂风入户香 (听花无语)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求一醉红尘忘（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">解得千愁绿蚁香 (听花无语)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蕉圃蛩鸣哀唤雨（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">菱塘鲤跃乐惊风（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜阑桐雨叩窗脆（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日暖竹风入户柔（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求一醉红尘忘（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">唯惧沉迷俗世忧（闲云）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蕉圃蛩鸣哀唤雨 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳岸蝉噪苦吆风（秋生）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜阑桐雨叩窗脆 (问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春半柳烟笼棹深（秋生）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求一醉红尘忘 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">莫怨平生白昼忙（秋生）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蕉圃蛩鸣哀唤雨 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳溪帆鼓喜招风（於发）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜阑桐雨叩窗脆 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春半柳烟绕岸浓（於发）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求一醉红尘忘 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">莫叹相逢白发生（於发）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蕉圃蛩鸣哀唤雨 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">危巢鸟躁恨无眠（震撼哥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜阑桐雨叩窗脆 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋老竹风入户凉（震撼哥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求一醉红尘忘 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">莫笑无情白发癫（震撼哥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蕉圃蛩鸣哀唤雨 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">梧林蝉噪倦呼风 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜阑桐雨叩窗脆 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋半荷风入户香 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求一醉红尘忘 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">不碍高歌清气留 (笛里关山)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">简 评：</b></p><p class="ql-block">首联出句：蕉圃蛩鸣哀唤雨</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 景物联</p><p class="ql-block"> “蕉圃”根据古诗文的意思是生长着芭蕉的园子，是“蛩鸣”的处所环境。</p><p class="ql-block"> “蛩鸣”即蟋蟀的鸣叫，蛐蟀一般在夏末初秋开始鸣叫，其鸣叫与气温变化密切相关。深秋时节，随着气温下降，蟋蟀会通过鸣叫来吸引配偶，其声音常被描述为“凄楚”“如泣如诉”，成为文人墨客表达秋愁的重要意象。柳永《尾犯》：“秋渐老，蛩声正苦”，描绘秋末蟋蟀鸣叫的哀婉氛围。</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 芭蕉园里，蟋蟀哀婉地鸣叫着，呼唤着雨的到来。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句写了特定环境、特定节令下的意象行为，师友们生发自然、辞工意美的佳作举例如下：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">蕉圃蛩鸣哀唤雨</span></p><p class="ql-block">竹篱萤舞静迎风</p><p class="ql-block">梅林鹤舞傲凌风</p><p class="ql-block">烟汀雁唳怅惊秋</p><p class="ql-block">竹篱萤散恐生风</p><p class="ql-block">柳堤燕舞巧裁风</p><p class="ql-block">荷塘月出苦悲风</p><p class="ql-block">野塘荷瘦怯迎秋</p><p class="ql-block">竹斋琴语淡涵秋</p><p class="ql-block">柳岸蝉噪苦吆风</p><p class="ql-block">柳溪帆鼓喜招风</p> <p class="ql-block">二联出句：夜阑桐雨叩窗脆 </p><p class="ql-block">联意解析：情景联</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 夜深了，梧桐树上的雨滴，滴落到窗户上，发出清脆的响声。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句“夜阑”，即深夜，作出句的定语，表特定的环境。“桐雨”是主语，“叩窗”是谓语宾语，而“脆”是补语。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们或围绕“夜阑”的环境，同框生发补充夜晚意象，或承接补充生发次日清晨意象，佳句比比皆是，不再一一点评。</p> <p class="ql-block">三联出句：但求一醉红尘忘</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析：感怀联</p><p class="ql-block"> “红尘”：佛教、道教等称人世、世俗之事。</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> （我）只求喝得大醉，把人世或世俗之事全都忘记了。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们和出句的意旨相称、生发自然的佳句举例如下：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">但求一醉红尘忘</span></p><p class="ql-block">何苦千愁白发衰</p><p class="ql-block">唯盼重逢旧梦温</p><p class="ql-block">岂管相逢白发飘</p><p class="ql-block">好把余生琐事抛</p><p class="ql-block">不惜余生利柄丢</p><p class="ql-block">却梦同舟瀚海游</p><p class="ql-block">那管重逢绿鬓疏</p><p class="ql-block">从此相欢绿野居</p><p class="ql-block">犹喜孤吟白首休</p><p class="ql-block">莫叹相逢白发生</p><p class="ql-block">莫笑无情白发癫</p> <p class="ql-block">审阅：芳草 云朵 杨柳岸 朱简 乡间晚风 文心 笛里关山 </p><p class="ql-block">简评：笛里关山</p><p class="ql-block">组稿：学荣 琢玉 荷花 淡定 愚夫 若水 雨燕 青丝羽衣 燕燕于飞 大海 老农 ANG.ZQ 弦思 梧桐 云朵 文心 听花无语 闲云 秋生 於发 震撼哥 笛里关山</p><p class="ql-block">（以投稿先后为序）</p><p class="ql-block">编录：笛里关山</p> <p class="ql-block"> 限于篇幅，选取有代表性的对句简评一二，雷同句以投稿先后顺序选择，其余对句不再一一列举。以上简评仅代表个人观点，因学识水平有限，难免有疏漏和不妥之处，欢迎各位师友予以指正。</p> <p class="ql-block">①出句为芳草老师精选集句</p><p class="ql-block">②对句为师友们原创</p><p class="ql-block">③图片来自AI创作</p>