<p class="ql-block">指导老师：张伯利 男，1953年6月出生，籍贯，陕西长安，陕西省诗词学会顾问，咸阳老年大学诗词鉴赏班老师。</p> <p class="ql-block"><b>诗词鉴赏班</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b>2025年春季班第二次作业</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b>五律或七绝</b>·<b style="font-size:20px;">三月</b></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 老师： 张伯利 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">五律 三月石板夹缝的小草</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">谦恭常克己，毫厘可为家。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">石板时时挤，青鲜日日发。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风询旧事，明月抚新芽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夹缝生存累，心祈一朵花。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">1. 高飞行</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 七绝 三月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">桃红十里鸟啾啾，浩渺烟波逐小舟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三月风光何处好，咸阳湖畔客如流。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2.李萍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">五律·三月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柔湖映日丹，暖霭绕堤滩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳线牵云影，凫雏戏水涟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">神迷春圃处，晓看市尘间。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">未返香盈袖，蝶飞我欲仙。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">3. 曹少萍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">五律•梦春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">提篮野菜搜，起铲喜心头。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">村口梅花灿，河堤柳絮悠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">南山苞蕾密，北岭麦苗稠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">窗外黄鹂叫，华胥一梦游。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">4. 贺勇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 七绝 三月遇战友张君</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三月春风迎战友，张君酒醉话黏稠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">那年重庆离别后，挥手乘船下鄂州。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">5. 王云武</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三月（舞娘）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">仙指甩挂云雾起，腰摆灵动风旋急。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">面如桃花丹凤眼，醉了少年郎身许。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">6. 毛应林 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">五律.农历三月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">远山石色绿，湖岸柳芽新。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鱼跃涟漪水，鹮翔倒影云，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清明花散瓣，谷雨露湿襟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">似感衣衫厚，方知又一春。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">7.张向荣</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 七绝 三月(骑游)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">暖日古城浮紫烟，桃花初绽竞争妍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渭河侧畔人熙壤，鱼跃留痕入画笺。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">8. 孙宝玲</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 五律 三月春夜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">湖光映月明，巢少鸟无声。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">靠岸船灯火，微风枝叶青。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">石桥流水缓，波浪皱纹轻。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">遥望寒星闪，梅开树暗红。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">9. 韦萍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七绝 三月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寒冬归隐越华山，春色如潮拂北塬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">湖畔鹅黄追燕舞，晚霞也恋岭梅园。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">10. 郭有成</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三月•观玉兰花</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">深藏蓄势已一冬，春来绽放露华容。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">乳洗白蝶先飞起，胭脂红蛹更浓情。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">11. 李爱琴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七绝·三月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春分逐暖柳衣鲜，偶尔发彪瞬变颜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">桃李花容初绽放，朱鹮新客众欣欢。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">12. 蒙吉品</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七绝·三月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三月春光满眼收，桃红柳绿染山头。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蝶蜂起舞花丛里，田野牛犁日未休。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">13. 刘秦岗 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七绝.三月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云携喜讯沁芳丛，春醒山河着彩裳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雷震邀来金燕舞，柳帘漫卷碧波长。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">14. 张桂玲</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三月韵响</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春堤渭水诵声扬，翠柳垂丝点镜塘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">更有诗涛添意趣，醉风袅袅滿园香。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">15. 刘治 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三月（新韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">溪畔花千树，夭夭似火燃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">疏林鸣翠雀，细雨破竹尖。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风过红颜落，芽出碧玉牵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">物候皆有序，何必慕神仙</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">16. 麻亚梅</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三月春景</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风暖柳无力，飘落杏花雨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">明月染春水，紫燕穿云梯</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">横波卧长虹，芳草吐新绿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">翁媪携稚子，欢谑放纸鸢</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">17.吴惠琴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七绝•三月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">仲春昼夜两均分，蛙鼓虫鸣暖日曛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">四季轮回皆过客，笑迎寒暑乐童心。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">18.刘颖</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">五律.三月赴姜嫄水乡挖野菜（新韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风悄告息，荠菜正当期。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">持铲寻芳味，提篮装野嬉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">粼粼漆水绕，碧碧草香袭。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">共享鲜蔬韵，盈筐惬意离。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">19.杜宝军</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三月踏青</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">九九风儿暖，黄花陌上艳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">舒心踏青游，惬意放足远。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕归识旧巢，雀勤觅新苑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">艳阳灿灿照，知是三月三。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">20、杨继康</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">五律•三月咸阳湖</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">湖畔岁红初，风光入画殊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳条迎面拂，草色满堤苏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">快艇犁波浪，深林闻鹧鸪。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">赏春何惧远，处处客相呼。 </span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">21.燕小君</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">走进三月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三春丽景荣，独步渭河东。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕舞山川秀，花开柳岸红。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">痴迷阡陌上，沉醉梦怀中。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一览咸湖荡，风吹诗意浓。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">22. 李亚杰</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">五律 三月滇东南（新韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三月彩云南，风和草木鲜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">梯田千面镜，硕果满山甜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云雾绕村落，轻舟过洞天。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">游人频驻步，疑入武陵源。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b><i><u>审核:张伯利 </u></i></b></p><p class="ql-block"><b><i><u>组稿:李萍</u></i></b></p><p class="ql-block"><b><i><u>整理制作:李亚杰</u></i></b></p><p class="ql-block"><b><i><u>图片来自网络</u></i></b></p><p class="ql-block"><b><i><u>咸阳市老年大学诗词鉴赏班</u></i></b></p><p class="ql-block"><b><i><u>2025. 3. 22.</u></i></b></p>