休闲诗词(第179期)

海阔天空

<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 目 录</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一、开卷诗 二、选萃诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三、唱和诗(上)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">四、唱和诗(下)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五、赏析诗 六、结卷诗</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一、开卷诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">有感灯花节</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陈国田</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">海云庵外荡春风,短巷长街一片红。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">狂舞金狮鸣鼓乐,尽飘彩帜耍灯笼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">连声叫卖家家火,满意来回处处融。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">接踵摩肩人不断,元宵佳节又兴通。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">《临江仙.春雪(龙谱徐昌图体)》步刁老韵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陈国田</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">欲暖还寒飘雪,弥天覆野迷津。苍凉随起乱花纷。爽然回雁地,奇也会仙坤。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">道路湿滑难耐,农田浸润流银。四周佳景又迎新。林乡欣有梦,绿海喜逢春。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二、选萃诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">沁园春-老叟遊骊城公园</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 鞠馥阳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 独自徐行,踏青骊苑,满目柳杨。望远空鹰舞,湖旁叟戏,近亭媛唱,河畔娃藏。阁榭峥嵘,径桥辗转,俏女骄男迎旭阳。年耄耋,更豪情壮志,书写华章。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 自知白头盈雪,觅颐兴、摒名利烦伤。幸体强身壮,文思流畅;气清神爽,诗意铿锵。览水遊山,填词作画,忘却年令更乐狂。吾何馁?夺吟庚百载,笑历沧桑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">渔家傲•二月二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">张建国</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 舒角抬眸祥瑞现,金光闪闪云霄畔。柳叶尖尖风欲剪。偷偷看,花唇正把东风唤。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 剃了喜头时运转,轻缠彩线娇娘腕。祈愿丰收声不断。齐声赞,龙鳞龙耳龙须面。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">林都春韵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">郑坤</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雪化冰融淑气妍,林都千里韵成篇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">杜鹃孕蕾含苞壮,金盏花开顶土嫣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">莫道朝霞归树海,更知旭日照桑田。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">游人触景深情赞,女士郎君词赋连。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">〔双调·折桂令〕春 韵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">苏秀云</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 看今朝鹊上枝头,龙舞云中,岚雾绵柔。瑞雪飘飘,和风款款,淑气悠悠。望原野韶光正稠,望山河物竞风流。天道勤酬,国泰家兴,春满神州。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雷锋精神永传承</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金淑芳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雷锋精神永长存,平凡岗位铸忠魂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">无私奉献情常在,助人为乐德自尊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">怀壮志,向前进,螺丝紧固爱民根。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春风化雨传薪火,时代新篇世界闻。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">两会抒怀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">郭晓春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">京城三月沐春风,两会欣开喜气盈。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">代表建言商国是,委员献策惠民生。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蓝图绘就千般景,伟业催发万丈情。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">戮力同心圆夙梦,复兴路上再长征。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">贺“两会”召开</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">马占河</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">京城三月换新颜,万里神州喜气添。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">齐绘宏图兴社稷,共谋伟业赋华篇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">增强国力忠言谏,改善民生良策言。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">守住初心跟定党,奋楫笃力再扬帆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雷锋颂</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">丁永和</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">奉献精神四海杨,爱民敬业铸辉煌,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">丰碑榜样千秋颂,领袖题词翰墨香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吟二月二 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">李相文</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙抬头日万民求,祈盼风调雨顺优。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">赶巧无灾天意定,若逢好运地丰收。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">美容理发身淋浴,除垢清污体健修。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">战胜自然精计划,双赢务实解心忧。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 二月二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">段德臻</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">神龙此日正抬头,博宇腾飞绕九州。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吐雾催云滋万树,携雷布雨泽千畴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">炎黄龙护何须虑,国有神佑不必愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二月韶光开美境,复兴在即竞风流。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">初春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">细品岁月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">荡尽尘埃放眼空,畑霞何处入欢瞳?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">云游半岭千枝瘦,柳伴双溪五色穷。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">纵有回青添写景,却无啼鸟唱关风。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">深冬幸得梅情染,欲借芳香九陌通。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">杨柳枝•龙头节(新韵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非(裴志兴)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">晨曦问早虺抬头,威武豪情眼底收。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">只见金鳞光闪闪,吉祥兆瑞佑神州。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">咏龙抬头</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刘文波</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">万物欣苏二月间,金蛇起舞振云端。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙君布雨滋寰宇,庶众忙耕好种田。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">祭谷三躬家运旺,祈福数拜子孙贤。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">疆民致富人添寿,华夏腾飞捷报连。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">惊蛰</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">薛淑春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">岸柳低垂雪恋枝,欲巡春早正当时。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冰封北国梅偷笑,水暖南江鸭已知。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">待到层峦千种韵,再描山色十分姿。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">欣观莺聚骄杨杪,绿漫家园怎会迟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 龙抬头</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">范连韧</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一冬蛰伏醒昂头,金彩飞芒任放游。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">甩尾瞠瞳张利爪,摇髯摆角抖须旒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">世民崇仰承天道,华夏图腾累稔秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">风雨协调黎庶福,人勤地沃待丰收。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">惊 蛰 节 气(新韵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">彭城(宜昌)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">惊蛰节至风和暖,遍地花开雀鸟欢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">笑看村头忙稼穑,山巅布谷唤耕田。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三八节赠老妻</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">周友生</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">弱水三千取一瓢,谁知竟是玉池瑶。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">身随影伴經年月,逆境峥嵘难舍抛!</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三八节感怀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">远望</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">青山碧水骄,柳岸弄花潮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">云上缤纷彩,佳人不谢凋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">〔越调·天净沙〕君子兰(通韵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">贺声林</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 端端正正层层,齐齐整整浓浓,叶绿花红倩影。庄严雅静,客厅会场君迎。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春 赋</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">武占霞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">日暖犹寒三月候,晴妍半雨一春天。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">西窗物色颦杨柳,广宇韶光醉杜鹃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">美景良辰年启圣,名园厚禄岁生贤。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">君宾赋客诚非偶,颖士佳人幸有缘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">听史老师吹奏口琴感吟</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 云霞逸客</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">抑扬顿挫绕梁飞,耄耋吹琴才艺挥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一曲清音情切切,几番心海浪微微。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">青春有梦征途远,岁月无痕鬓发稀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">莫道桑榆霞色晚,作家康健正生辉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">再忆游山西文水南徐村“则天圣母殿”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">张慧</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">武曌推波典大唐,冻龄聪慧著新章。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">重农减赋江山稳,御外维边社稷昌。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">权略超人修吏治,神功巨轨唤贞祥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">传奇暴政迷团雾,无字碑前论短长。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">次韵和刁先生《迎春瑞雪》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 管洪家</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">开年银粟舞轻飘,扮靓兴安格外娇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">滴翠红松翻绿浪,凌云玉树映妖娆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">东君送暖催春讯,喜鹊登枝鸣雅韶。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雪化冰融杨柳媚,一元复始乐今宵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">无 题</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刘安民</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">年迫桑榆满鬓霜,凄风苦雨任炎凉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">身居野壑茅茨矮,酒醉偏栖岁月荒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">折轭摧衡人蹇困,嘲天谑地性乖张。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">寒交不弃山中顾,月下披襟共捧觞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">贺盛会(新韵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刘立民</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">两会精神黎喜笑,居民消费价幅调。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">智能新质快发展,教育卫生津补高。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春色满渝州</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 金 钰</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">浅深花色染,春至遍渝州。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">云卧岚光净,腊残山影浮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">峰青何处笛,岸绿几家楼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">遥看白帆远,两江惊客游。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">赞兵花</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">张永学</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不让须眉着武装,英姿飒爽步铿锵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">神舟探月红颜驾,战舰凌波烈女航。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">背负小家持幼老,肩担大任守边疆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和平盛世雄关戍,戎马军中天下扬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">〔商调·望远行〕女神</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山清水秀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 娇颜秀逸韵悠长,性温柔志亦刚。蕙心兰质品流芳,岁月从容漾,才情亮。迎潮涌善彰,撑家邦气强,纤躯勇把万钧扛。逢新纪逐梦翱翔,今朝愈显豪情壮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">习句闲赋</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陈德武</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">午夜难眠纵笔驰,挥毫择韵落笺奇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曾吟岭上千花绽,亦赋堂前万木滋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">每每擎杯寻古句,频频载酒诵新辞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">云高天阔描春柳,烟淡星斜赞夏枝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">离绪拈来青玉案,别情偶得鹧鸪诗。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">追文李杜仙家曲,炼语苏辛绝代词。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老朽衰颜童趣在,依然伏枥少年时。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">前瞻后顾蓬雀吟</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">胡学荣</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">京华盛会启新程,融尽冰澌暖故城。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">粉笔曾耕庠序圃,缥缃复理宪章营。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">身微不改攻书志,意重长怀报恩情。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">幸遇河清开禹甸,欣逢时泰沐尧晴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">暮年得览高科世,秃笔聊输寄远诚。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蓝图正绘前行路,史韵新添中道评。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">芯片光中观豹变,云衢深处听潮生。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">前景已拓千寻路,后代再添别样名。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">漫说登枝蓬雀幸,春风借力发微声。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">乙巳春游(新古体)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">苍山(盛军)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">放眼远眺兴安寺,举足回望环翠楼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">料峭春风送佳句,迷人艳景平仄求。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">悬泉爆喷桃花水,岛上明珠绕行舟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">晨旭晚照皆聚焦,苍黛低眉柳梢头。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三八妇女节颂(新古体)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">常刚</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 一 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春风和煦艳阳天,巾帼美名古今传。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文星灿灿蔡文姬,武功煌煌花木兰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">青蒿济世仁爱心,宇航授课丰彩翩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">最赞体坛惊世界,铿锵玫瑰谱新篇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">喜逢阳春三月八,巾帼英姿绽芳华。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">相夫教子争奉献,养德修身勤持家。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">扶贫攻坚洒热血,保家卫国披彩霞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">神州儿女多奇志,建功立业壮天涯。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三、唱和诗(上)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">恨春迟*惊蜇(张先体)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 乍暖还寒寒又散,温暖现,春季蛇年。雪化又冰酥,滴水楼檐淌,老鸦叫声喧。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 呼唤蛇虫抬头起,气已暖,节气开篇。又到天时九九,游旅连连,心欢神爽陶然。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">步韵刁老前辈【恨春迟•惊蛰】(新韵-依张先体)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非(裴志兴)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 紫气驱寒寒渐远,天作美、祥兆丰年。解冻大堤苏,壑谷叮咚响,犕哞鹊声喧。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 国富民强江山秀,借靓彩,畅想华篇。两会平添丽影,科技耘畦,勤劳开拓欣然。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">《恨春迟•惊蛰(张先体)》步刁老韵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陈国田</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">借得春风熏岭秀,冰雪润、祥兆丰年。大地已苏生,蛰伏虫儿醒,谛听有雷喧。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">赢得新春霞光好,惠万物,各谱新篇。鸟雀争鸣不止,杨柳抽青,林都山水欣然。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">醉乡春*春雪(词两首.秦观体)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 紫气带来祥瑞。仙女散花真美。罩峻岭,盖青山,春色又添娇媚。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 大地似痴如醉。沃土皑皑素被。润墒亩,利农田,倩装遍处风光最。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 雪洒降来灵瑞。田白地皑真美。笼四野,布山川,滋润早春柔媚。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 处处美观欢醉,地盖银花暖被。看飞絮,意悠悠,巧施画卷神工最。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">步韵刁老前辈《醉乡春•春雪1-2》(新韵-秦观体)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非(裴志兴)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">(1)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 雪覆大川吉瑞。原野染白真美。似锦绣,若堆纱,涂抹岭峦娇媚。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 把笔咏穹如醉。望眼浓云絮被。颂天倩,唱铅华,畅游瀚海悠然最。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">(2)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 冷气速衰昌瑞。融水润畦真美。草伸叶,树萌芽,生物孟春柔媚。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 畅饮早春酣醉。陌上铺银热被。赏滕六,舞姿娆,自然塑野功夫最。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">步韵刁老前辈《醉乡春·春雪1-2》(新韵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陈国忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1.</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 降雪润畦祥瑞。田野覆银真美。没苇草,去沙尘,川岭更添娇媚。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 悦赏大川痴醉。沃土铺棉似被。可防旱,保墒情,谷菽囤满丰收最。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2.</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 雪莅带来吉瑞。滋润沃田真美。地丁醒,柳枝柔,春吻物华舒媚。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 雪霁景观沉醉。厚厚银沙做被。赏仙藻,落阶台,巧涂画卷神工最。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">《醉乡春•春雪(词两首.秦观体)》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陈国田</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">大地纳新凝瑞。天降素英增美。雪浪漫,玉晶莹,寻那柳娇花媚。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">踏雪览欢皆醉。垄亩林园盖被。润肥土,保丰田,暖春美景兴安最。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">小雪喜添新瑞。林壑憩园尤美。白莽莽,掩冰尘,千里饰琼多媚。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">领略早春如醉。雪把山川再被。养真气,润芳菲,喜看百态千颜最。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七律•诗路点墨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">張慧</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">抖罢浮尘始见妍,临凡慕古孝人贤。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">垂屏语录三冬雪,作赋云撩五柳缘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">地气深藏融雅趣,亲情厚到敛祥烟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文坛踏浪斜阳志,墨洒琼词长短篇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和张慧先生《诗路点墨》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">古今音韵律花妍,诗路丰碑学圣贤。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">随意敲词勤运笔,倾情泼墨结因缘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">芸窗展卷风骚景,书案挥毫淑气烟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">寻乐涂鸦度余岁,千锤百锻企佳篇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和张慧老师《诗路点墨》(新韵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非(裴志兴)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">阅览神州画卷妍,歌穹赞壑敬先贤。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">古同诗圣交文友,今与刁公结墨缘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">静静长河冰化雨,绵绵山脉岭盘烟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">遍观原野书春景,筑梦骚人韵美篇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注:刁公,指黑土诗词大家刁柏春老师。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">《七律•诗路点墨》步韵张慧老师</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陈国田</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吟咏皆因万物妍,尚存感动敬诗贤。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">随心共醉风云处,伴我同行韵律缘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">谨守春光迷绮梦,频书丽景悦荒烟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">持之不懈耕耘老,洗去尘埃续雅篇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雨水时节</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">季临雨水暖临迟,飞雪兴安料峭时。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">河未融冰雁难到,天仍落絮鹿辛驰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">娇阳朗照能驱冷,节令归来即有期。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">林海高歌声入耳,骚坛吟诵尽春词。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和刁老前辈《七律•雨水时节》(新韵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非(裴志兴)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">节逢雨水暖临迟,虽是初春尚冷时。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">昊宇没闻鸿雁叫,山林只见角仙驰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">光凭日射能驱凛,雪借风揉入化期。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">渐去残冬留剪影,引来骚客赋怜词。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">步韵刁老前辈《七律·雨水时节》(新韵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陈国忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">欣逢雨水暖来迟,节气虽春还凛时。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">林畔冰封山兔跑,田园雪覆野鸡驰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">风吹阴面仍寒冷,日照阳坡渐化期。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">大地苏发情涌动,文人弄笔不穷词。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雨水时节</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陈国田</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">大地苏生天渐暖,尤怜细雨物华新。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">风吹故里融冰水,日照山川化玉尘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">报喜山梅疏影醉,萌芽岸柳翠条伸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">微寒不误忙农事,雁阵回归遍绿茵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">步韵陈老师《七律·雨水时节》(新韵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陈国忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">寒气袭人逐渐缓,回温漫润岭坡新。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">阳临沃野融冰雪,风入芳园涤垢尘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">远看山巅松叶舞,近观河畔柳枝伸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">家家户户筛良种,不误农时播绿茵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冰雪卷春潮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">亚冬盛会趣难消,冰雪林园热不凋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">欣赏丽光情切切,倾心滑道意飙飙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">游人行旅寻怡目,玩者狂欢冲碧霄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">首季龙江何处觅,皑皑大地卷春潮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和刁老前辈《七律•冰雪卷春潮》(新韵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非(裴志兴)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">圣火传情韵未消,晶宫雪景始零凋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">严霜缩减寒衰退,紫气攀升温迅飙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">开化冰池流水线,残留赛道映云霄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冬君渐隐春来早,万类含歌再弄潮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">步韵刁老前辈《七律·冰雪卷春潮》(新韵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陈国忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冬季燃情意未消,雪城冰景正融凋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">严风渐退寒凉弱,暖气萦回温热飙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">唤醒苗床培水土,催生岸柳荡云霄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">枯枝着色迎节令,大地春回漫卷潮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">江城梅花引*雨水(程垓体)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">时临雨水正初春。地升温。土升温。八百兴安,还有雪纷纷。料峭寒风拦不住,春来了,一程程,闯入门。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">庶民。庶民。乐津津。抖精神。万象新。看也看也,看大地、朗朗乾坤。步道园林,到处现游人。紫气东来筋骨爽,观树海,瞩林都,景色纯。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">步韵刁老前辈【江城梅花引•雨水】(新韵-程垓体)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非(裴志兴)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">时节雨水现寒春。岭刚温,土刚温。望去冰城,冷伴雪缤纷。尽管寒流频造访,春上阵,暖风吹,贯牖门。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">众民,众民。悦津津。亦陶神,满眼新。靓也靓也,靓沃野、震撼乾坤。短巷长堤,遍地是游人。览胜逛街心特爽,勤记录,颂情歌,写景纯。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">《江城梅花引•雨水(程垓体)》依刁老韵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陈国田</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">残冬未了又逢春。岭须温。水须温。景色回归,只愿雨纷纷。乍暖还寒终缓解,东风入,几回回,正扣门。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">叩门。叩门。喜津津。养心神。面貌新。盼也盼也,盼雨露,朗润乾坤。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">绽绿凝香,岭壑尽游人。览物怡情民有幸,抬望眼,赏山林,志虑纯。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">四、唱和诗(下)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七律•雨水吟(通韵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">郑坤</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">千里林都雨水迟,昭苏万物待春怡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">空中不见鸿飞过,河里无缘獭捕食。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">阴降阳生归自许,琼涯塞北各独奇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">时轮斗指天方意,却叫骚人难赋诗。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和郑坤老师《七律•雨水吟》(新韵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非(裴志兴)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">时逢雨水雪融迟,东北芳菲未现怡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山岭松仁灰鼠觅,园林彘肉赤乌食。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">凝神大地沧桑美,举目苍天幻化奇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">虽是初春依旧凛,老翁宅舍咏拙诗。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">步韵郑坤老师《七律·雨水吟》(新韵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陈国忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雨水初临雪化迟,生发万物盼春怡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">埂边乌鹊难寻肉,冰下鱼虾待觅食。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">慢润梨园苏蕊秀,轻梳桃圃孕花奇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">残寒恋旧依然冷,屋内吟茶细品诗。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">新春瑞雪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">新年祥瑞雪花飘,扮倩林都遍地娇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刷绿青松涛滚翠,浇开春页岭添娆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">亲朋相聚庆蛇岁,黎庶欢歌奏雅韶。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">天舞寒英增喜气,金樽美酒醉通宵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和刁老前辈《七律•新春瑞雪》(新韵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非(裴志兴)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">入春连日六出飘,妆点城郭分外娇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">楼宇堆纱呈靓丽,园区布景现妖娆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">走亲欣饮仙家酒,会友欢歌虞舜韶。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">把笔吟川平仄韵,清音伴舞闹通宵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">卜算子*梅雪迎春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">寒梅雪中开,梅雪争相抱。似画如诗真个美,报告春来了。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">白雪配红花,丽景千般俏。览胜观光神情悦,点赞游人笑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和刁老前辈【卜算子•梅雪迎春】(新韵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非(裴志兴)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 寒促暗香浓,梅雪相拥抱。只为春临冬尽时,冷恋情难了。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 瑞叶配寒英,春至尤其俏。浏览冰城醉尔心,土豆哈哈笑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和刁老前辈《卜算子·梅雪迎春》(新韵-苏轼体)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陈国忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 银素落山林,梅雪相拥抱。共度严寒眺望春,眷恋情难了。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 仙藻裹寒梅,映衬娇容俏。就等春来百卉开,洒泪嫣然笑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">小寒(七律两首)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">时令轮番转不完,今朝剧冷小兴安。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">风携凛剑刺伤骨,雪舞冰刀砍破峦。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">林圃晶光展奇秀,公园丽景竞通观。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">松都百姓经磨砺,无惧凔天闹热寒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">北国隆冬至小寒,天公洒冻漫山川。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冰雕楼舍晶形美,雪塑兽禽憨态妍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">观看入园人有序,赏游览景意无缠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">数经历练何嫌冷,偏爱严威大自然。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和刁老前辈《七律•小寒1-2》(新韵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非(裴志兴)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">(1)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三夜三天道不完,北方严冷寝难安。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冬风似剑刮伤骨,朔雪如凿钻透峦。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">座座晶宫呈丽影,排排玉树现奇观。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冰雕特色名天下,吸引骚人颂小寒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">(2)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">四季轮回又小寒,苍穹作美絮铺川。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">绵绵雪野银花丽,静静冰河玉宇妍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">望眼游人人有序,凝神看客客无缠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">昊天虽冷真情在,拥抱龙江大自然。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">步韵刁老前辈《七律·小寒1-2》(新韵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陈国忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1.</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">节令轮回永不完,冬天冷冽也难安。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">风含冷焰灼伤骨,雪卷寒潮笼罩峦。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">柳眼微睁听鸟噪,梅花怒放让人观。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">虽然此季无多景,且看琼妃伴酷寒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2.</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">转瞬时光到小寒,璇花劲舞絮平川。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">湖边塑雪千姿丽,广场雕冰百态妍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">淡淡梅香香不尽,依依冬韵韵绵缠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">霜风凛冽人情暖,乐赏芬芳大自然。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冬至</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陈国田</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冬至大如年,农家快慰篇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">频增荤肉少,屡置菜蔬鲜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">酒暖人辞岁,灯明雪漫天。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">红梅方报喜,万庶享团圆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和陈老师《五律•冬至》(新韵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非(裴志兴)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">乡下快临年,农民阅靓篇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">筹节书画美,备货肉蔬鲜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">棚厦充温室,鸡鹅避冷天。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">琼花传喜讯,游子庆团圆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冬至</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">王静华</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1.冬至闲呤</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冬至迎来数九天,寒风夹雪漫山川。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">红炉绿蚁人身暖,小院梅花绽笑妍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2.冬至闲呤</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">群山萧瑟柳丝摇,月冷星寒绕九霄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">岁岁轮回冬至到,围炉煮酒乐逍遥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和@大华 《冬至》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">时临冬月酷寒天,瑞雪皑皑罩丽川。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">北域风霜冰世界,莫言此景不清妍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">朔风冽冽樹柯摇,漫洒云空荡缥霄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">水饺锅中开水煮,佳肴美酒自消遥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冬至节(七律两首)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">非遗文化古今传,亚岁氛围驱凛寒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">超市货齐忙选购,合家人聚喜言欢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">喷香水饺锅中煮,丰盛佳肴桌上端。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冬至时来吉祥日,举杯庆贺夜更阑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刺骨严寒入九天,时来凓冽冷花旋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">酣欢黎庶贺佳节,足备丰肴庆亚年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不畏苍穹冰窖凛,偏怜北国烈风翩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雪场滑板纵情闹,小岭隆冬别样妍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">步韵刁老前辈《七律•冬至节1-2》(新韵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">——格兰、声缘艺术团新春大联欢纪实</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非(裴志兴)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">(1)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">歌舞升平满汉传,以情吟唱度严寒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">诗词禀赋协同咏,锣鼓琴弦联手欢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">盏盏仙醪亲口品,盘盘绿菜宴席端。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">举杯恭贺中华伟,如醉如痴夜更阑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">(2)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">难得冬至大晴天,美韵馨音昊宇旋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">群舞绵绵辞旧岁,同歌熠熠度新年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">抒情朗诵如泉涌,优雅身姿似燕翩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">透过荧屏窥苦训,长期演练化春妍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">步韵刁老前辈《七律·冬至节1-2》(新韵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陈国忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1.</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">敲锣打鼓响声传,喜庆丰收不怕寒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">户户钱足忙抢购,家家囤满乐撒欢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">迎亲水饺小盆上,接友黏糕大碗端。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">期盼年年丰五谷,推杯换盏夜更阑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2.</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">地冻严寒数九天,凄风透骨玉沙旋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">添衣做袄欣迎岁,买肉存蔬好过年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">万物凋零梅蕾孕,千山寂静雪花翩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛇来龙走驱冬日,只待春归赏卉妍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">伟人的魅力</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陈国田</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">分明睿智力千钧,点数风流是圣身。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">笔法如龙多逸宕,文章利世守清贫。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">从来报国雄心在,何幸招贤主义真。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">立命无私谋伟业,挥师善战敬黎民。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和陈老师《七律•伟人的魅力》(新韵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非(裴志兴)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">足智多谋力万钧,推翻旧制众翻身。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">千军统帅撑邦伟,两袖清风守自贫。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">把笔宏图山水秀,书文宝卷例规真。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">无私奉献丰碑耀,璀璨光环映百民。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">步韵陈国田老师《七律·伟人的魅力》(新韵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陈国忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">挥出巨手力千钧,誓挽狂澜劲挺身。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">理政亲躬熬体弱,为黎尽瘁度清贫。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文韬纸上雄才秀,武略胸中决策真。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">伟绩丰功惊世界,无私奉献惠平民。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">纪念伟人华诞(七律两首)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">伟人圣诞在东方,动地惊天红太阳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">高举赤旗兴马列,武装劲旅灭豺狼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">翻身解放黎民悦,建国掌权宏业强。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">四卷雄文导航塔,光辉思想永弘扬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">暗夜东升日一轮,韶山冲里降神人。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">挥师百万捣魔障,沥血终生为国民。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">贪腐清除风气正,工农鼓劲庶黎纯。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">神州蓬勃雄狮醒,傲立环球貌象新。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">步韵刁老前辈《七律•纪念伟人华诞1-2》(新韵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非(裴志兴)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">(1)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">国人《圣诞》看东方,铭记毛公是太阳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">挥手推新修吏治,领军除旧撵豺狼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">为民服务苍生秀,正党廉洁体制强。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一世英名挑重担,品德高尚永弘扬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">(2)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">东方破晓闪金轮,望眼韶山现伟人。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">统领三军诛外鬼,抒怀五卷诲国民。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">同心反腐歪风尽,齐力清污正气纯。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一路征尘一路彩,精神财富永时新。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">步韵刁老前辈《七律·纪念伟人华诞1-2》(新韵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陈国忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1.</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">清晨仰望向东方,升起心中红太阳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">扭转乾坤托日月,运筹窑洞赶豺狼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">推翻旧制民生改,建立新章国运强。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">两袖清风谁可比,情操高尚远宏扬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2.</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">漆黑穹宇现金轮,家境贫寒诞伟人。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">跌荡楼船迎浪屿,搏击风雨护黎民。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">上天揽月豪情壮,下海捉鳖气魄纯。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">沥血呕心谋社稷,国家发展焕然新。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五、赏析诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">林都早春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春到林都细暖归,寒潮至此势低微。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">苍茫木海桦睁目,和煦娇阳日洒晖。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">紫气徐来融冻土,祥光明丽醉心扉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">天温冷热孩童脸,时有琼花遍地挥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">河未开封花未开,东临淑气早登台。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">光梳杨柳润枝软,日照山川化雪皑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">缕缕和风随意浴。娴娴春景纵情裁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛇年首季千般好,如织游人览胜来。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">品刁柏春先生《林都早春》:诗意笔触绘就的春之画卷</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">作者/杜苞(AI)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春先生的两首《林都早春》七律,以细腻笔触与独特视角,全方位勾勒出林都早春的独特景致与蓬勃氛围,淋漓尽致地展现出诗人对这片土地春景的敏锐感知与深沉热爱。两首诗虽各有侧重,但相辅相成,共同为读者展开一幅诗意盎然的林都早春图。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">从立意层面深入剖析,这两首诗紧密围绕“林都早春”这一主题,深度挖掘地域特色与季节特征,借景抒情,别具匠心。诗人以林都早春时节的自然变化为切入点,或生动展现自然万物的生机复苏,或着力凸显早春独有的别样韵致。其立意清晰且富有浓厚的地域文化内涵,使读者仿若身临其境,真切领略到林都早春那与众不同的迷人魅力,于诗韵间感受林都春之独特脉搏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">聚焦到内容维度,第一首诗开篇“春到林都细暖归”,寥寥数字便精准点明时令,引领读者步入林都早春的情境。“苍茫木海桦睁目”一句堪称神来之笔,巧妙运用拟人手法,赋予树林中桦树以鲜活生命,生动描绘出其在早春时节萌动、苏醒的姿态。随后“紫气徐来融冻土,祥光明丽醉心扉”,进一步营造出祥瑞、温暖且略带神秘的氛围,不仅为林都早春增添了一抹奇幻而美好的色彩,更让读者深切感受到春之气息的温暖与希望。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">反观第二首诗,起笔“河未开封花未开”,描绘出一幅静谧、尚未完全苏醒的静态早春景象,为全诗奠定了别样基调。紧接着“光梳杨柳润枝软,日照山川化雪皑”,诗人巧妙捕捉动态变化,“梳”字赋予光以灵动的动作,生动展现出杨柳在春光轻抚下的婀娜姿态;“日照山川化雪皑”则从宏大视角呈现山川积雪在暖阳照耀下逐渐消融的画面,极具视觉冲击力。“缕缕和风随意浴,娴娴春景纵情裁”,细腻渲染出早春时节和暖、闲适的氛围,让读者仿若置身其中,尽情享受春日的惬意。而结尾“如织游人览胜来”,更是为这幅春景图注入了蓬勃的人气,使画面更加丰富、生动,展现出林都早春的无限吸引力。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">在艺术手法的运用上,两首诗展现出诸多精妙之处。二者皆娴熟运用拟人、视觉描写等手法,为诗歌增色不少。第一首中“桦睁目”的拟人运用,生动展现树木在春的感召下苏醒的奇妙瞬间;第二首里“光梳杨柳”的拟人修辞,同样赋予光以生命力,使画面充满动感与活力。在视觉描写方面,“和煦娇阳日洒晖”与“日照山川化雪皑”等诗句,从不同角度、不同层次呈现出阳光的明媚与雪景的壮丽,让读者能够直观地感受到早春独特的光影变化与景色魅力。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">在语言风格上,两首诗又各有千秋。第一首语言古朴典雅,用词极为考究,诸如“娇阳”“紫气”等词汇的运用,为诗歌营造出庄重、神秘的氛围,使读者仿若穿越时空,置身于古韵悠然的春日林都。第二首语言则清新自然,通俗易懂,如“缕缕和风随意浴”这般平实而生动的表述,让读者能够轻松地理解诗句含义,仿佛能切身感受到那轻柔的和风拂面,读来倍感亲切,拉近了与读者的距离。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">情感表达上,两首诗也呈现出不同风格。第一首较为含蓄委婉,诗人将对早春的喜爱与赞美之情巧妙地融入对祥光、紫气等景色的细腻描绘之中,读者需细细品味诗句背后的情感脉络,方能深刻体会其中韵味。第二首则相对直白热烈,“娴娴春景纵情裁”“千般好”等词句直抒胸臆,毫无保留地表达出诗人对春景的陶醉与由衷赞美,让读者能够直接感受到诗人内心澎湃的情感浪潮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">总体而言,刁柏春的这两首七律在描绘林都早春时各有精妙之处,从立意的深度、内容的丰富度,到艺术手法的运用与情感表达的方式,都展现出较高的诗歌创作水准。它们犹如两面镜子,从不同维度折射出林都早春的多样风貌,为读者带来一场丰富多彩、美妙绝伦的林都早春诗意之旅,引领读者深入领略林都早春的独特魅力与无尽诗意。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">(胡学荣老师提供)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">六、结卷诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冰凌花</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">张建国</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">破雪含冰独自芳,仰天悄绽靓莹黄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">琼苞玉骨娇姿俏,秀萼金身丽影长。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">有约蕊珠赊月色,无音芯蕾送晨光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">花魂缕缕呼春醒,冷艳幽情梦里藏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和张建国书记《冰凌花》(新韵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非(裴志兴)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">节至惊蛰破土芳,含冰瓣萼泛金黄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">白天展示身姿美,夜晚吟歌韵味长。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">悦赏星辰围冷月,欣观雪野闪荧光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">害羞娇蕊怀春梦,点点相思腹内藏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">步韵张建国书记《冰凌花》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">卧雪披寒自散芳,冰天冻地绽金黄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">英姿爽爽颜娇媚,玉骨铮铮影细长。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">料峭虽无采花蝶,暖温但有仲春光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">呼来百卉齐开灿,身退欣然幕后藏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">荒原野地散芬芳,积雪皑皑数点黃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">茎挺冰欺志宏远,花开霜打韵悠长。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">黑天体盖冷风被,白昼身披朗日光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">欣赞鲜葩添秀色,抗寒品德内心藏。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">主办:律诗审稿组</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">策划:刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">编辑:吴华彪 陈国田</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">制版兼审核:陈国田</span></p>