诗友唱和《冬日有怀》

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<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">泰来县诗协诗友唱和锦集</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">首唱王德江</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冬日有怀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">王德江</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">已把烦忧一一删,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">债无难得半冬闲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吟哦那顾归鸿泪,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">离别堪怜折柳鹇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七秩悲欢皆逐水,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">百年荣辱可观山。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平生喜作寻诗事,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">来路仍留几道关。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">注:文字债。(2024.12.5)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> </span>二</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冗文歪句不停删,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陋习仍存笔墨闲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">有责观屏修史料,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">无求泽畔访鸥鹇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">涂鸦数载苏黄字,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">咏雪千诗赤县山。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">倾斝吟哦寻快活,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">燃鞭送福到年关。</span></p><p class="ql-block"> 三</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">群中乱语未停删,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">课件连连难有闲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">每每三更酌字句,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">回回半日谒湖鹇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">长吟梓里寒江雪,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">大劈世间贫屋山。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老木邀鸥同作赋,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">共书粳米岀乡关。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2024.12.6.</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">冬日有怀</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">王德江</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 四 </span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">添堵添烦整个删,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">蜗庐斟字少着闲。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">几曾与友寻遗址,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">又结盟鸥访芷鹇。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">日记江桥修馆史,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">直书将士守乡山。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">撰编当效两司马,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">老木实难过此关。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 五 </span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">结社冗词一劲删,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">廿年码字很难闲。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">群贤壮志拥擎纛,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">几彦高怀纳野鹇。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">芦荻眉开绰水绿,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">塞鸿汗洒杏花山。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">新推诗会重赓续,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">六进途程过省关。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 六 </span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">撰文废话几回删,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">陋习随成变散闲。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">随友采风歌五稔,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">邀鸥泽畔话千鹇。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">联镌数阁多君字,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">背倚层林半子山。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">映雪寒门惟煮酒,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">一吟一饮唱乡关。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 七 </span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">每逢改稿字难删,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">岀格失粘目不闲。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">诗里言情酬故友,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">涘中莲意恋新鹇。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">驰毫多用湖洲笔,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">采风常登乾德山。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">时别沙鸥留不住,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">暮年何必过阳关。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 八 </span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">与友群聊终未删,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">常思兄妹一游闲。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">登桥长叹硝烟日,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">倾斝伤怀湖涘鹇。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">邀约枌榆观嫩水,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">乍临亭榭话乾山。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">东坡已在红尘外,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">莫问人间几道关。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 九 </span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">俗句虚言不吝删,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">经年编辑未曾闲。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">一书吟廉堪悬镜,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">二卷修文可送鹇。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">时见中枢蝇虎圄,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">更闻三北树荫山。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">桃源岂许人轻入,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">洗尽尘心可进关。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 十</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">经年痕疾实难删,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">今昔编修不肯闲。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">眼下行文常少意,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">园中泽畔偶多鹇。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">也曾沽酒几轮盏,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">更爱呼朋一集山。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">欲泛冬云千顷阔,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">波波凝雨落江关。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">(2024.12.8)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和德江老师【冬日有怀】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">李家伟</span></p><p class="ql-block">一、</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">深藏记忆总难删,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">思绪偷来半日闲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一盏清茶惭笔墨,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三更银月念鸥鹇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">八旬天地诗书枕,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七秩情怀陶令山。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">只惜无为人寂寞,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">至今发白未临关。</span></p><p class="ql-block">二、</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">故里情怀不可删,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">怡人风物得悠闲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">半池香墨留丹鹤,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一阕清词寄白鹇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">旧隐难为金缕曲,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">归途莫负小重山。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">年终展望春心荡,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>祈盼寒贫秀出关。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和德江老师【冬日有怀】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">李家伟</span></p><p class="ql-block">三、</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">营盘交替任人删,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鸿信难能片日闲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">落木萧萧枝别雀,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">寒云寂寂浦藏鹇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">戎歌一曲凌河水,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">塞酒三杯五指山。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">迟暮之年何所欲,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">沙场携手赴乡关。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">说明:这首和诗主要是写了我在部队的生活,复员以后,想起了我在五指山的战友,2020年我们在海南得以重逢,说不尽的战友情,道不尽的怀念之情……</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 凌河水,是我们当兵的地方,大凌河畔,五指山,是我们50年后重逢的地方。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和德江老师【冬日有怀】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">李家伟</span></p><p class="ql-block">四、</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">俗事烦忧反复删,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">无官无职一身闲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">几曾沽酒邀蓬户,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不肯题诗看野鹇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">记忆灞桥多少泪,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">牵连梁苑北南山。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">何时长策成伊吕,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>怎许愁颜困此关。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">五和德江老师【冬日有怀】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">李家伟</span></p><p class="ql-block">五、</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">唱酬吟复又增删,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">难得能偷一日闲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">斗柄三更无雁雀,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">梅香半榻见鸥鹇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">轻描塞北皑皑雪,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">淡写江南座座山。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">迟暮不辞诗佐酒,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>醉中托梦入乡关。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">六和德江老师【冬日有怀】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">李家伟</span></p><p class="ql-block">六、</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">慵词赘语即时删,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一改从前懒散闲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">乘兴围炉聊李杜,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">放怀出郭话鸥鹇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">云霞万片苏公句,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">楼阁千重陆子山。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">纵酒梅诗冬月里,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>陶然半醉胜阳关。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和德江老师【冬日有怀】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">李家伟</span></p><p class="ql-block">七、</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">每逢聚会酒难删,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">大小杯赛盏不闲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">囊里青蚨酬远客,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">庭前粟米醉迷鹇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">题诗轻掷封侯笔,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对弈常怀出塞山。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">人走空余门似铁,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">依稀风送又当关。</span></p><p class="ql-block">八、</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">如玉珍藏君莫删,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">萍踪每忆泰湖闲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">登楼不羡烟霞阁,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">煮酒常思鸥鹭鹇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">偷约桃源同读水,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">遥临阆苑共吟山。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">沧桑阅尽斜阳冷,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">梦里温馨秀出关。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2024.12.6.</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和德江老师【冬日有怀】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">李家伟</span></p><p class="ql-block">九、</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秃笔文章拙尽删,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">残篇梳理得安闲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">梨园招隐容流水,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">梅径通幽许大山。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">已见雪拦韩愈马,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">更闻风卷老坡鹇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">凭栏望断南飞雁,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">墨洗乡愁酒洒关。</span></p><p class="ql-block">十、</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">心中幽怨总难删,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">今日重逢白发闲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冷落云楼惭笔墨,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">纷陈雪巷宿鸥鹇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">何曾烈酒从容盏,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">已惯金笺淡泊山。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">塞北冬来梅最好,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>清香缭绕醉乡关。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和德江老师《冬日有怀》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刘长发</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">烦恼无踪见到删,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">修身养性自然闲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">聊斋故事情垂泪,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">水泊梁山学鸟鹇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">几度悲欢心如水,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">千般意境似穿山。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">逢时苦读寻兴趣,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>陶醉其中过瘾关。</span></p>