<p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>原创七律计105首</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">101 七律~乐写律诗</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">(下平一先)</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">乐写律诗超百首,闲裁章法历余年。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">白头淡泊古香觅,新岁勤劳真趣牵。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">不惧病中痴意妙,只思静处醉心专。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">寒花自得风情抵,秃笔时闻兴味然。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">2023.02.01.(1)</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">102 七律~趣迎新春</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">(上平十四寒)</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">迎春云破神州暖,捧日冰融大地欢。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">祸去祥光携造化,福来丽景载平安。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">孙儿笑向童园阔,子女忙于事业繁。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">冬尽翁痴非几样,年开媪趣欲多般。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">2023.02.03.(2)</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">103 七律~趣味春天</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">(下平六麻)</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">长寿迎春妍百朵,应真伴老艳群花。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">当窗草碧闲人喜,映彩丹红好友夸。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">月落帘前凝晚翠,阳升壁上泛朝霞。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">忘机律暖情怀绕,得意天宽趣味拿。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">2023.02.04.(3)</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">忘机~ 消除机巧之心。 </span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">常用以指甘于淡泊,与世无爭。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">104 七律~上元节后历春天</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">(上平十四寒)</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">张灯瑞庆烟花劲,把酒丰盈邻里欢。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">釜煮元宵期共醉,梅开正月喜相看。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">新春远去时闻苦,异地重来不怕难。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">香拂诗篇添秀美,笑迎祖国驻昌繁。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">2023.02.05.(4)</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">105 七律~春日健身</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">(下平七阳)</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">初春病去披襟乐,正月身轻逐步康。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">旭暖溪山传鸟语,风和庭院享晴光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衰颜老罢浮生醉,壮气心宽灵药芳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">荏苒流年迎晓露,平安华发伴斜阳。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">2023.02.06.(5)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">老罢~衰老疲惫。谓年老百事皆废。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">🌷律诗写作心得分享</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">通过百首律诗写作,自己摸索总结出</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">一点小窍门,这样写法,名词,动</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">词,形容词都可以岔开,不会平头。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">会让律诗更加流畅生动!</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">1+2或2+1是指写作律诗的结构,指</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">每联最后三个字。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">七律写作格律及结构的四种形式</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">(1)平起首联</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">名词动词2+1</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">(2)仄起首联</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">动词名词1+2</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">(3)平起首联</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">动词名词1+2</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">(4)仄起首联</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">名词动词2+1</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">由此可见,不管平起仄起首联,都是</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">动词名词1+2</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">名词动词2+1</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">的格律结构</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"></span></p>