🌺🌺第48期 🌺步韵《秋兴其六》 <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">依韵杜甫秋兴其六</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 潇湘夜雨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">千山脚下落云头，不尽繁华罩熟秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">最爱群峰腾楚韵，更欢阔野去乡愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逶迤通道连遥远，澄澈清湖泻瀑流。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晋屏观瞻新气象，江南风景聚郴州。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋兴</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">舍得</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">银屏岭下草埋丘，露漫深山我自愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">枫菊双牵临晚暮，桥溪相伴守余秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">阶前行步青衫湿，梦里思乡故影浮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">怨得灰丝爬两鬓，唯留残字寄汀州。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋兴八首之六</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">小小流水</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">香尘槐径遍王侯，帝里画旗探素秋。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浅岸笙歌奇技显，娇莺丽影画窗羞。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">溪听豪宴人争赋，鼓起芳城雁忘洲。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">佳景何成伤魄地，银鞍太过唱风流。 </span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋兴</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">风中雨荷</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">四周环顾立舟头，万里萧森是九秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">客路风寒生别怨，沙汀荻白惹闲愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心期不见云中雁，日暮空闻水上鸥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">缕缕情怀何处寄，一支乡曲向并州。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">游子归心</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">神山居士</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">空朦冷雾绕山头，几柳疏枝扫暮秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">万叠飞花凋塞地，千层落叶惹乡愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">登高未见翔天雁，航远方观破浪鸥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">步入初冬游意倦，修心取暖返南州。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">吴山远望</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">张定华</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">东升红日过山头，密叶丛中不见秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花萼林间蜂蝶满，犁园眼下水云柔。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">难寻远塞炊烟暗，遥望睛空去鸟悠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">只是风和霜渺渺，香浓草木醉双眸。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">孤雁</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">君子笑</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寒风瑟瑟立城头，断雁声声泣晚秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">细听悲音无尽苦，平添倦旅几多愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">朝来跨马霜侵路，夜里衔杯梦入鸥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">欲问此心何处去，早随帆影渡瀛州。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">梦回故乡</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">萧琼</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">情丝万缕系心头，梦里家山已暮秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">杨柳烟村听客语，芙蓉铁镇惹乡愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">珠泉玉镜星光照，凤岭龙潭月影浮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">往事随风催白发，滔滔钟水下衡州。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋兴</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">蒲公英</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">残阳映照柳梢头，到处凄风见老秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">不喜哀虫田里泪，应怜弱鸟道边愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">悲吟野岸浮烟树，怅望长河绕水鸥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">最恨寒来飘冻雪，人间梦幻赴琼州。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋兴冬游</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">舒风和雅</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">飞舞寒英落白头，风吹黄叶美冬秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雪披紫禁琉璃冷，云断宫垣御柳愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">槐老萧疏无倦鸟，水寒寂寞有眠鸥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鼓楼钟响声留客，北海陪游话帝州。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">悟人生</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 舒风和雅</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风吹窗柳画寒鸥，落叶红黄已暮秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">残雪冬青皆好景，朔云石竹总牵愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">惟知子女浪漫度，更说夫妻初志酬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">四季时光流似水，韶华倾负少闲忧。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋游漳泽湿地公园</span><span style="font-size:20px;">（通韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">王俊杰</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">畅游湖面坐船头，岸柳婆娑好个秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">携友吟诗多感慨，沿途赏景少忧愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">密林深处喜闻鹊，芦苇丛中常翥鸥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上党城郊一宝地，风光旖旎比杭州。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋兴</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">胡志刚</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初冬雅兴觅田头，地角霜寒冷过秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">稻灿金黄存喜庆，家丰衣食没忧愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">长空雁急传红信，野荡人闲忆白鸥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">多少舒心云水岸，年年山色入芳洲。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋日湘江</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">段楚媛</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">层林青翠漠江头，万里风光竟自由。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">枫叶萦堤骚客韵，黄花绕径画工留。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">长空鸿雁追云际，落日烟霞戏白鸥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">昔日英雄崭恶浪，东流碧血换芳洲。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>秋暮</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">段楚媛</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">草木凋零秋复秋，浮生何必觅闲愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">疏篱黄菊绕幽径，高树丹枫竟碧丘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">四季花开堪有异，三春柳舞不终留。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">西风虽是无情客，岂把寒凉挠白头。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>秋兴</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">赵振中</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风清月朗吻山头，露润霞晖郁翠秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">绿蚁三杯生百乐，红袍一盞解千愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">归巢恋树林怡鳥，戏水冲天浪湧鸥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">十足祥和华夏地，万分秀丽数杭州。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">照像机</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">卜兰如</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">快门才一收，日月个中留。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">冬计寻春色，风尘约五州。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">浮光乘兴寄，故事后来求。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">酸涩描咸淡，炎凉解旧愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>唱和秋兴其六</span><span style="font-size:18px;">（古风）</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">淡远</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">曹娥江涉孝德头，赴水寻父远古秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">娥庙巍巍传盛世，孝心切切自担愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">松樟夹岸参天碧，百舸争流逐鹭鸥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">喜看如今名胜地，越中千古舜王州。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>唱和杜甫秋兴其六</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/寻龙舟</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">叶落无声泣冷秋，轻霜扑上柳梢头。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">轮回节序催芳逝，清浅华年扰梦愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">白发芦花妆古句，碧流江水照沙鸥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">窗前好景连天外，又是焜黄换九州。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">寒秋雾</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">山人行</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">四季轮回无谓头，金衰水起近寒秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月沉西海波光冷，雾漫东山树影愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">枯蔓老桐停白鹭，荒滩孤岛宿沙鸥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">巴渝灵气流渠尽，一出夔门弃万州。</span></p><p class="ql-block"> </p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>山村秋暝</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">文／青青竹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">西风裹雨近深秋，落叶浮沉惹客愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">阁入斜阳非我问，空翻雁阵任谁留。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">樵歌隐隐穿幽径，野水萧萧唱晚舟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">宿鸟徬徨何与诉，炊烟莫断望中收。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>咏长江</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 潇湘夜雨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一路奔腾浪逐鸥，沿途滋润百千州。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文明隽秀层层涌，历史深沉缓缓流。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">岸石曾经磨楚剑，水花未怠淬吴钩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春潮澎湃宏图展，奋发精神永不休。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋兴其六</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">杜甫</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">瞿塘峡口曲江头，万里风烟接素秋。花萼夹城通御气，芙蓉小苑入边愁。珠帘绣柱围黄鹄，锦缆牙樯起白鸥。回首可怜歌舞地，秦中自古帝王州。</span></p> 原玉赏析 <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">瞿塘峡口曲江头，万里风烟接素秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px; color:rgb(128, 128, 128);">——</span><span style="color:rgb(128, 128, 128);">瞿塘峡与曲江相隔万里，但战乱遥接，形成如秋天般的萧森气象。从瞿塘峡口到曲江头，从目前的万里风烟，想到过去的歌舞繁华，寓情于景。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">花萼夹城通御气，芙蓉小苑入边愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(128, 128, 128); font-size:22px;">——</span><span style="color:rgb(128, 128, 128);">花萼楼的御步长廊直通芙蓉园。竟也成为疆场惹人悲愁 ！入边愁，指安史叛军在边疆作乱惊破长安的太平梦。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">珠帘绣柱围黄鹄，锦缆牙樯起白鸥。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(128, 128, 128);">——</span><span style="color:rgb(128, 128, 128);">当年园中的珠帘绣柱，曾有多少天鹅环飞 。江船华丽的锦缆、象牙桅，惊起成群的白鸥。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">回首可怜歌舞地，秦中自古帝王州。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">——</span><span style="color:rgb(128, 128, 128);">作者由所处之地想到所思之地，两地虽相隔万里，秋气却贯通连接。隐隐谴责帝王因贪图安逸享乐引来国难边愁。表达了作者忧国忧民的感慨。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 22px;">图片：来自网络</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 22px;">制作：风中雨荷</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 22px;">声明：本诗集已获得诗稿作者授权</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><a 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