三唱《临江仙》  陶醉在其间

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<p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">歌名: 朵朵荷花出碧水</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">作曲:谷健芬</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">填词:闲来一聚</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">学唱:闲来一聚</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 临江仙(新韵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 咏 荷</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"> 文 : 闲来一聚</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 与明代、杨慎《临江仙·滚滚长江东逝水》词,步韵奉和,填词两首。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">(一)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">朵朵荷花出碧水,争妍彰显英雄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">含苞以待向天空。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">淑姿施粉黛,绿伞点千红。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">气概昂然怀坦荡,任凭沐雨经风。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">芳馨引客自相逢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">徜徉青帐里,愉悦在心中。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">歌名: 楚楚撩人情似水</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">作曲: 谷健芬</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">填词: 闲来一聚</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">学唱: 闲来一聚</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">(二)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">楚楚撩人情似水,芳泽一展英雄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蜻蜓青睐伴悬空。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">昂然舒异彩,窈窕面潮红。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛙鼓蝉鸣声响亮,摇舟蝶舞清风。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文人骚客喜相逢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">挥毫留墨迹,吟唱乐其中。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">歌名: 滚滚长江东逝水</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">作词: 杨慎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">作曲: 谷健芬</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">原唱 : 杨洪基</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">翻唱 : 闲来一聚</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;"> 附录《临江仙 . 滚滚长江东逝水》原词 :</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">临江仙</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">滚滚长江东逝水 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">文 : 明 · 杨慎</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">滚滚长江东逝水,浪花淘尽英雄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">是非成败转头空。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">青山依旧在,几度夕阳红。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">白发渔樵江渚上,惯看秋月春风。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一壶浊酒喜相逢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">古今多少事,都付笑谈中。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">注 : </b></p><p class="ql-block"> </p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 本格《临江仙》为苏轼格体,双调六十字,上下片各五句,平仄格律一致,均为三平韵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 为便于记忆,其特点是两七字句平仄相对仗,两五字句平仄相对仗,即五、六、七字句均符合诗律的变化要求;为此,特推荐如下为正格体 :</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">‖: 中仄平平平仄仄,中平中仄平平。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">中平中仄仄平平。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">中平平仄仄,中仄仄平平。 :‖</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 五律(新韵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 篇尾曲</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"> 文 / 闲来一聚</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">菡萏争奇艳,池塘姹紫红。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">快门留倩影,收获满屏中。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">古往词牌展,今来意趣浓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">填词学步韵,传正力推崇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">图片来源 : 手机随拍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">音频录制 : 闲来一聚</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">图文编辑 : 闲来一聚</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p>