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假如你是李华，你的英国网友Melisa给你发来邮件，她想知道新冠疫情对于中国餐桌礼仪以及文化的影响。 1810 张瑞泽

Dear Melisa,

I'm glad to hear from you. You want to know how COVID-19 has influenced the Chinese table manners. Now let me tell you.

As is known to all, when it comes to COVID-19, all of the people are so afraid of it that they start to pay attention to preventing the virus by improving diet hygiene. One part of it is the use of the chopsticks. Chopsticks have a long history in China with its special meaning and several ways to use. After the outbreak of the virus, a great new tool called serving chopsticks came into peoples sights. As it becomes more popular ,some people misunderstand it. While in my opinion, serving chopsticks shouldn't just be recommended but be treated as good methods to stop people from COVID-19. What they can do is reducing contacting by accident.

With all I talked above, I draw a conclusion that COVID-19 has made a difference to Chinese table manners especially to the chopsticks. How about the changes in your country ?Tell me next time.
Yours
Li hua

教师评语：张瑞泽同学阐述问题条例清晰，思维严谨，句式结构多样且使用的恰到好处，整篇文章阅读下来让人产生愉悦之感，是一篇上乘之作。

A letter to Melissa
1810 李成
Dear Melisa:
I'm glad to hear from you . You want to know how COVID-19 has influenced the Chinese table manners . Now let me tell you .
With the outbreak of COVID-19,more and more people pay much attention to the eating hygiene .And because of the wide using of the chopsticks , Chinese people notice that if they don't use serving chopsticks, the COVID-19 will spread fast . So the serving chopsticks are becoming popular now . Also these is somebody misunderstanding the chopstick . For example , most of them think the serving chopsticks make them and their family keep a proper distance, but they want to be close to their family . In addition , they think serving chopsticks are meaningless . And they prefer to use the chopsticks directly as it used to be. In my opinion , serving chopsticks are must for our lives especially with the outbreak of COVID-19 . Using serving chopsticks is a way to protect our family . It not only shows our love to our family , but also gives our strength to our country to prevent the virus from spreading. As a consequence , the world will be better.
To sum up , COVID-19 has really changed the Chinese table manners and make people know the importance of life.

教师评语： 李成同学的作文维持一贯的高水准，书写漂亮，逻辑结构自然清晰，无论阐述什么问题都能娓娓道来。

Dear Melisa,
I am glad to hear from you.You want to know how COVID-19 has influenced the Chinese table manners. Now let me tell you.
As is known to all, chopsticks are widely used in China during meals. However,due to the virus, we come to have meals with serving sticks and realize the importance of eating hygiene gradually. Using serving chopsticks,which is beneficial to us, is widely accepted by an increasing number of people. But when it comes to serving chopsticks, some people may misunderstand it, because that is not convenient to pick food. In my opinion,not only can it keep us healthy, but also we treat guests in a polite way. Generally speaking, using it is a great way to let us be healthy.
How about the changes in your country? Tell me next time.
Yours
LiHua

教师评语： 陈婷丽同学这篇文章的最大亮点在于连接词的合理和有效的使用，另外，上课所习得的各种知识也能够被熟练的运用到文章中去，是一名学习效率极高的同学。

Serving Chopsticks
1810 刘乐怡
Dear Melisa,
I'm glad to hear from you. You want to know how COVID-19 has influenced the Chinese table manners. Now let me tell you.
Chopsticks, a symbol of Chinese culture， play an important role in the daily life of most Chinese people. Serving chopsticks have been used by Chinese people for many years. With the outbreak of COVID-19, people pay more attention to food hygiene. As a result, serving chopsticks is becoming more and more popular.
Some people think that the use of serving chopsticks is unnecessary because it seems too inconvenient to do so. But as a Chinese , you are supposed to develop the culture of serving chopsticks and try your best to stop the spread of COVID-19. So using serving chopsticks as long as possible is important.
All in all, whether it's to develop culture or protect ourselves， it requires us to use serving chopsticks.

教师评语：刘乐怡同学的作文取得了明显的进步，文章结构清晰，观点层层推进，上课所学的知识也熟练的运用到了写作中，值得表扬。

1810 聂子淇

Dear Melisa,
I’m glad to hear from you. You want to know how COVID-19 has influenced the Chinese table manners. Now let me tell you.
People in China are used to using chopsticks to have meals. Because of the COVID-19,people become more and more serious about the eating habits .Using the serving chopsticks is accepted by many people .It is a good way to prevent the spread of the virus. But there are still some people misunderstanding using serving chopsticks on the dining table. However, in order to be healthy, it is necessary to have serving chopsticks in my opinion.
How about the changes in your country? Tell me next time.

教师评语： 聂子淇同学的作文渐入佳境，可见平时花费了更多的功夫，尤其是大量英语固定搭配的使用更加自如，下次可以在文章的深刻性上下更多的功夫。

1810 李沂航

Dear Melisa,

I'm glad to hear from you. You want to know how COVID-19 has influenced the Chinese table manners. Now let me tell you.

Nowadays, lots of Chinese people get used to using serving chopsticks because of COVID-19. People pay more attention to eating hygienes under this serious epidemic as they feel like being healthier.
However,someone makes misunderstanding on serving chopsticks as they think they are improper for Chinese national culture. Instead, in my opinion, serving chopsticks are exactly the ones that we are expected to use.
According to what I mentioned, serving chopsticks are truly good for our health. In a word, you'd better use the serving chopsticks.

教师评语：李沂航同学的作文展现出来良好的语言功底，各类复杂句型的自如运用很好的体现了这一点，连接词的有效合理的穿插在文章中使观点的呈现更加的自如。

1810 钟洋

With the spread of the COVID-19, people began to realize the importance of daily hygiene. And serving chopsticks has become more and more popular.

In my opinion, using the serving chopstick is better when people have dinner . If people use their own chopsticks to pick dishes, then dishes will mix with everyone else's saliva. It's too disgusting. But it seems cleaner when people use the serving chopsticks. It’s polite while someone visit you home and having dinner there if you propose to use the serving chopsticks. Because you don’t know whether your guests like it or not.

According to what I mentioned above, I draw a conclusion that using serving is better for our health.

教师评语：钟洋同学的作文有了明显的进步，尤其是文章的结构铺开和观点呈现的逻辑上。高级句型的使用也逐渐的开始出现在文章中，这是很好的现象。以后写作中要更加注意少犯语法错误。

Dear Melisa,
I am glad to hear from you.You want to know how COVID--19 has influenced the Chinese table manners.Now let me tell you.

During fighting with COVID--19, there are some rules about Chinese table manners . First, now we always use serving chopsticks. It is healthier than before. So serving chopsticks becomes more and more popular because of COVID--19.We are supposed to pay attention to the food hygience. What is more,you had better hold the bowl with your hand.If you don not do it, the owner will think you are impolite. Besides, there is a big change , that

is, the Chinese people realize that eating animals is scary.We should pay attention to the hygience and protect the animals.
How about the change in your country?Tell me next time.
Yours,
Li Hua

教师评语：郑思逸同学的作文的结构和句式使用上进步都特别明显，能够感觉到语言的锤炼比以前更加自如。另外，句子和句子之间的连接也变得自然和生动。

1810 何晔萱

Dear Melisa，
I’m glad to hear from you. You want to know how COVID-19 has influenced Chinese table manners.Now let me tell you.

In China,we have used chopsticks which have a common usage for many years.With the COVID-19 breaking out, Chinese began paying much attention to the hygiene of eating, which aims to keep ourselves safe and healthy. Because of it,the chopsticks have become popular gradually,which could not only keep us from COVID-19 but also make us more polite while were having dinner with someone, but there are still some misunderstandings about serving chopsticks .For example,someone thought it would make distance between people.However,in fact, it is wrong totally.
According to what I mentioned above,I draw a conclusion that using serving chopsticks is playing a key role in protecting ourselves and we should stick to using them.
How about the changes in your country?Tell me next time.
Yours,
Li Hua

教师评语：何晔萱同学的作文表现出了极高的良好素养，大量词组和高级词汇的使用令人印象深刻，观点的呈现也是层层推进，是一篇上佳之作。

Dear Melisa,
I’m glad to hear from you. You want to know how COVID-19 has influenced the Chinese table manners.Now let me tell you.

The chopsticks are the eating tools that have the longest history so they are widely used. The people are made to strengthen eating hygiene since the COVID-19 broke out. In order to take measures to protect each other， the government advises us to use serving chopsticks. So a growing number of people start using serving chopsticks. Besides,some people didn't like serving chopsticks even though they were dirty in their first impression. In fact, the chopsticks are much cleaner than private chopsticks.
According to what I mentioned above,I draw a conclusion. We are supposed to stress the importance of eating hygiene and get used to the old habits gradually. I believe that everything will go well.
How about the changes in your country? Tell me next time.
Yours,
Li hua.

教师评语：刘馨媛同学这篇作文令老师印象深刻，不仅思想深刻，而且文章结构合理，条理清晰，让阅读者产生愉悦感。

Dear Melisa,
I’m glad to hear from you. You want to know how COVID-19 has influenced the Chinese table manners.Now let me tell you.
The Chinese have used the chopsticks for many years. When you are in China,you can eat all kinds of food with the chopsticks. However,because of the influence of the COVID-19, people are becoming more and more serious about the eating health. As a result,the serving chopsticks have been used since the outbreak of the COVID-19.Just like the name of the serving chopsticks, it is communal, so you can use it to get the food into your bowl instead of eating food with it.
What I want to say is that the COVID-19 changed a lot,not only in China but also around the world.When the outbreak of the COVID-19 is over,the world will be better than before.
Yours,
Li hua.

教师评语：刘浩屹同学这篇作文进步巨大，观点鲜明，论据给力，语言机构多样化，尤其是最后一段结尾是整篇文章的最大亮点。

Dear Melisa
I'm glad to hear from you. You want to know how COVID-19 has influenced Chinese table manners.Now let me tell you.
What has been drawn more attention to by COVID-19? The answer is hygiene. As we all know ,the chopsticks are used in China and the dishes on the Chinese table are communal, different from Western countries.
Because of COVID-19 and being scary of it，the serving chopsticks have been becoming more and more popular lately. However there are still many people who think using the serving chopsticks is impolite to have meals with others.But what I want to say is that using the serving chopsticks can keep the virus away and it is good for our health .
Without doubt, although serving chopsticks is a new form of the Chinese table manners , it will play an important role in everybody's modern daily life.
Yours,

Li Hua
教师评语：管梓良同学的作文行文流畅，文笔优美，让读者读起来，尤其是一些高级句型的使用让人印象深刻，希望继续保持。

1810 兰盾

Dear Melissa,
I ' m glad to hear from you. You want to know how COVID—19 has influenced the Chinese table manners. Now let me tell you, there is no doubt that we still use

the chopsticks due to its long history .But the disease al so changes our lives a lot .We pay much more attention

to eating hygiene. Using serving chopsticks is no longer some words. But there are some people misunderstanding it .Serving chopsticks ought to be communal instead of being personal .So we are supposed to use them to get food into the bowl and then return them where they used to be. In my opinion, it's a little inconvenient but safety comes first .There is no reason not to use them.
How about the changes in your country? Tell me next time.

教师评语：兰盾同学文笔细腻，句型多样，上课时所教授的知识点能够很好的运用到文章中去。

Dear Melisa
I am glad to hear from you.You want to know how COVID-19 has influenced the Chinese table manners.Now let me tell you.

As a kind of household everyday things, chopsticks are practical.No matter who you ask in China, all of them know how to use them.
Nowadays,people seem to be changed by an invisible hand to COVID-19. A rising number of them use serving chopsticks.Most of people think it is good for hygiene.
However,serving chopsticks are misunderstood by someone who disgust them.Only when they meet some problems,they know the importance of serving chopsticks
According to this passage，what I metiond above is that we are supposed to hold on using serving chopsticks。

教师评语：蒋唐煦同学作文起伏较大，这篇作文又恢复到了较好的状态，不仅思维严谨，而且词的使用准确而高级，希望继续保持。

1810 龙康睿

Dear Melisa，

I am glad to hear from you.You want to know how COVID--19 has influenced the Chinese table manners.Now let me tell you.
To begin with, nowadays, the chopsticks are one of the symbols of Chinese culture. But there are more and more Chinese people paying attention to the eating hygiene because of the COVID-19. For example, Chinese people are used to using serving chopsticks lately. However, every coins has two sides. Some people have misunderstandings with the serving chopsticks . In their view , serving chopsticks is extremely impolite . Because the action makes people like strangers . Despite the fact that chopsticks will bring this kind of feeling, it is protecting our health and body that matters.In the past, the serving chopsticks were used by Chinese people hardly. You couldn't imagine how big the chance we give to the virus to come into our body!
In a word, according to what I mentioned above , people are supposed to use the serving chopsticks as much as they can.
教师评语：龙康睿同学的作文上进步特别明显，这篇文章已经展现出了较好的语言素养，句型多样化使用，连接词运用的恰到好处，复杂句的使用已经较为自如，希望再接再厉，并且要避免语法错误。