<p class="ql-block">原创 绿苔私家英语 私家英语资源库</p> <h3><strong>2021.1.8真题原文对比A</strong></h3></br><h3><strong> 私家英语 </strong></h3></br><h3><strong>真题</strong><strong>A </strong><strong>338</strong><strong> 词 </strong></h3></br><h3>1.More than 25 years ago, Saroo Brierley lived in rural(农村) India. One day, he played with his brother along the rail line and fell asleep. When he woke up and found himself alone, the 4-year-old decided his brother might be on the train he saw in front of him—so he got on.</h3></br><h3>2.That train took him a thousand miles across the country to a totally strange city. He lived on the streets, and then in an orphanage(孤儿院). There, he was adopted by an Australian family and flown to Tasmania.</h3></br><h3>3.As he writes in his new book, A Long Way Home, Brierley couldn’t help but wonder about his hometown back in India. He remembered landmarks, but since he didn’t know his town’s name, finding a small neighborhood in a vast country proved to be impossible.</h3></br><h3>4.Then he found a digital mapping program. He spent years searching for his hometown in the program’s satellite pictures. In 2011, he came across something familiar. He studied it and realized he was looking at a town’s central business district from a bird’s-eye view. He thought, “On the right-hand side you should see the three-platform train station”—and there it was. “And on the left-hand side you should see a big fountain”—and there it was. Everything just started to match.</h3></br><h3>5.When he stood in front of the house where he grew up as a child, he saw a lady standing in the entrance. “There’s something about me,” he thought—and it took him a few seconds but he finally remembered what she used to look like.</h3></br><h3>6.In an interview Brierley says, “My mother looked so much shorter than I remembered. But she came forth and walked forward, and I walked forward, and my feelings and tears and the chemical in my brain, you know, it was like a nuclear fusion(核聚变). I just didn’t know what to say, because I never thought seeing my mother would ever come true. And here I am, standing in front of her.”</h3></br><h3>文章大意:走失的孩子寻找家乡,与母亲重逢。</h3></br><h3>21. Why was Brierley separated from his family about 25 years ago? 细节题</h3></br><h3>A. He got on a train by mistake. B. He got lost while playing in the street.</h3></br><h3>C. He was taken away by a foreigner. D. He was adopted by an Australian family.</h3></br><h3>22. How did Brierley find his hometown? 细节题 第四段</h3></br><h3>A. By analyzing old pictures. B. By travelling all around India.</h3></br><h3>C. By studying digital maps. D. By spreading his story via his book.</h3></br><h3>23. What does Brierley mainly talk about in the interview? 概括 笔墨较多</h3></br><h3>A. His love for his mother. B. His reunion with his mother.</h3></br><h3>C. His long way back home. D. His memory of his hometown.</h3></br><h3>原文与真题语篇逐句对比:<br></br></h3></br><h3><strong>原文:934</strong></h3></br><h3>原文</h3></br><h3>More than 25 years ago, Saroo Brierley was one of many poor children in rural India. At 4 years old, he couldn't read: He didn't even know the name of his hometown. His mother was raising four children on her own, and they were constantly hungry. Brierley's older brothers would hop trains to nearby towns to search for scraps to eat.</h3></br><h3>One day, Brierley tagged along to the next city down the rail line. He took a nap in the station, and when he woke up, he couldn't see his brother. Finding himself alone, the 4-year-old decided his brother might be on the train he saw in front of him — so he hopped on.</h3></br><h3>真题</h3></br><h3>1.More than 25 years ago, Saroo Brierley lived in rural(农村) India. One day, he played with his brother along the rail line and fell asleep. When he woke up and found himself alone, the 4-year-old decided his brother might be on the train he saw in front of him—so he got on.</h3></br><h3>逐句对比:转述原文was one of many poor children in rural India为lived in rural(农村) India;删除第一段原文后面的句子。真题的第二句话进行了改写,不过根据真实故事改编的电影情节,此处不是玩而是为了生计出去赚钱。不过这样改写也没问题,把走失的情节说清楚了。删除, he couldn't see his brother,将Finding改为and found;将hopped on替换为 got on。</h3></br><h3>原文</h3></br><h3>"It was just an impulse decision," Brierley says, "that, in fact, changed my destiny for life."</h3></br><h3>That train took him across the country to Kolkata (then called Calcutta), where he spent five harrowing months. He was more than a thousand miles from his home, in a city where he did not speak the language.</h3></br><h3>He lived on the streets, then in a juvenile home and, finally, in an orphanage. There, he was adopted by an Australian family and flown to Tasmania.</h3></br><h3>真题</h3></br><h3>2.That train took him a thousand miles across the country to a totally strange city. He lived on the streets, and then in an orphanage(孤儿院). There, he was adopted by an Australian family and flown to Tasmania.</h3></br><h3>逐句对比:改动整合较大,将一段话(38词)改为较短的一句话(15词)。在第二句中,删除a juvenile home and, finally, 留下后面的in an orphanage,并加上孤儿院的中文注解,降低难度。</h3></br><h3>原文</h3></br><h3>As he recounts in his new book, A Long Way Home, Brierley couldn't help but wonder about his hometown back in India. He remembered landmarks, but since he didn't know his town's name, finding a small neighborhood in a vast country proved to be impossible.</h3></br><h3>真题</h3></br><h3>3.As he writes in his new book, A Long Way Home, Brierley couldn’t help but wonder about his hometown back in India. He remembered landmarks, but since he didn’t know his town’s name, finding a small neighborhood in a vast country proved to be impossible.</h3></br><h3>逐句对比:词段改动较少,替换recounts 为writes。</h3></br><h3>原文</h3></br><h3>Article continues after sponsor message</h3></br><h3>Then he found Google Earth. He spent years searching for his hometown in the program's satellite images, zooming in and out of the map, exploring the web of railway lines criss-crossing India. Then, in 2011, he came across something familiar.</h3></br><h3>Brierley tells NPR's Arun Rath about his years-long search for his family and their emotional reunion.</h3></br><h3>Interview Highlights</h3></br><h3>On what he was looking for, and eventually found, in Google Earth</h3></br><h3>I thought to myself, "Well, the first thing you're gonna see before you come to your hometown is the river where you used to play with your brothers, and the waterfall, and the architecture of this particular place where you used to visit quite a lot." It has to be exactly the same, otherwise, if it's not, I'd just fly over and go somewhere else.</h3></br><h3>Google Maps YouTube</h3></br><h3>So I studied it very carefully — extremely carefully — and this architecture of this particular place where I used to play with my brothers in the water was exactly the same. And I questioned myself: "Well, that's a bit unusual, but there could be other places that look exactly the same too, you never know." So I thought, well, why don't we just scroll a little bit more. ... Before you know it, I was looking from a birds-eye view at the town's central business district. ...</h3></br><h3>I thought, "On the right-hand side you should see the three-platform train station" — and there it was. "And on the left-hand side you should see a big fountain" — and there it was. Everything just started to match. ... So I traced a road back that I would follow back as a child, and before I knew it I was looking at the suburb where I had grown up, and just on the right of it was the house I had grown up in. ...</h3></br><h3>真题</h3></br><h3>4.Then he found a digital mapping program. He spent years searching for his hometown in the program’s satellite pictures. In 2011, he came across something familiar. He studied it and realized he was looking at a town’s central business district from a bird’s-eye view. He thought, “On the right-hand side you should see the three-platform train station”—and there it was. “And on the left-hand side you should see a big fountain”—and there it was. Everything just started to match.</h3></br><h3>逐句对比:进行了大量的细节删除,然后对余下的语句进行改写,Google Earth替换为a digital mapping program。</h3></br><h3>原文</h3></br><h3>I couldn't sleep for that whole night.</h3></br><h3>On what happened months later, when he took a trip back to that house and found it empty</h3></br><h3>I had come all the way to find something I'd found on Google Earth. And now I'm standing there, here's the house where I grew up as a child, and the door's shut, and it's locked, and there's no one there. And I can't believe how small it is.</h3></br><h3>Saroo Brierley was born in Khandwa, Madhya Pradesh, India, and currently lives in Hobart, Tasmania.</h3></br><h3>Richard Malone/ Courtesy of G. P. Putnam's Sons</h3></br><h3>And I just thought the worst, I thought perhaps everyone's gone, my whole family's died, they've passed away. But lucky for me this lady came out of a doorway holding a baby, and she said, "Can I help you?" ... And I said to her, my name is Saroo and these are my family members' names. ... Another person comes in and I sort of spill my mantra to them as well.</h3></br><h3>That went on quite a few times with other people that kept wanting to know this person that's a foreigner that's coming to a town that's never seen a foreigner ... And by the time the fourth person had come, they said, "Just stay here for a sec," and within 10 minutes they came back around and they said, "Now I'm going to take you to your mother."</h3></br><h3>And I couldn't believe it, because when I went around the corner, which was only 10, 15 meters around the corner, there [were] three ladies standing in front of an entrance to a house. And I looked at the second one and I thought, "There's something about you" — and it took me a few seconds but I decrypted what she used to looked like. ...</h3></br><h3>真题</h3></br><h3>5.When he stood in front of the house where he grew up as a child, he saw a lady standing in the entrance. “There’s something about me,” he thought—and it took him a few seconds but he finally remembered what she used to look like.</h3></br><h3>逐句对比:删除路上找寻的过程,保留到达目的地的关键情节。将decrypted改为remembered。整合句子进行表述。</h3></br><h3>原文</h3></br><h3>She looked so much shorter than I remembered when I was a 4 1/2-year-old child. But she came forth and walked forward, and I walked forward, and my emotions and tears and the chemical in my brain, you know, it was like a nuclear fusion. I just didn't know, really, what to say, because I never thought this point in time or ever seeing my mother would ever come true. And here I am, standing in front of her.</h3></br><h3>真题</h3></br><h3>6.In an interview Brierley says, “My mother looked so much shorter than I remembered. But she came forth and walked forward, and I walked forward, and my feelings and tears and the chemical in my brain, you know, it was like a nuclear fusion(核聚变). I just didn’t know what to say, because I never thought seeing my mother would ever come true. And here I am, standing in front of her.”</h3></br><h3>逐句对比:删除无关紧要的细节when I was a 4 1/2-year-old child.;emotions改为feelings。</h3></br><h3>总结:</h3></br><h3>1 删除段落较多,词数减少了五六百字。</h3></br><h3>2 大胆整合,改写句子。</h3></br><h3>3 删除细节。</h3></br><h3>4 替换生僻词汇</h3></br><h3>5 增加部分语言,以表达具体等</h3></br><h3>以下分析来自一位学生(仅供参考)</h3></br><h3>高二学生:北执 感谢指导老师:史心语<br></br></h3></br><h3> <a href="https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/miQcDrtHllF3ywCwqLXWLg" >查看原文</a> 原文转载自微信公众号,著作权归作者所有