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来深圳大半年了，一直也没有时间去走走，读你们的文章，我也在深圳“云游”了一番。Such a pleasure reading your articles. (Heart Heart Heart)

Shenzhen is Calling ---羊毅佳

Shenzhen lies in the south of China. It is a city which is full of energy.

There are many beautiful places of interest in Shenzhen such as the of the World. This is the place to visit if you are interested in the landmarks of other countries. You can also go to the Happy Valley if you love playing. I believe you will have a good time there

Shenzhen is famous for its high-tech products. If you visit Shenzhen, you can't miss one thing---the light show. There is a light show on every special days. When the show begins, many buildings light up the sky. The view is really beautiful！

The center of the city is very convenient. There are many shopping malls. The stores in the malls sell different kinds of things. If you like shopping, you will love it！

Shenzhen has something for everyone, so why not visit Shenzhen one day?

Shenzhen is Calling ---颜雨悦

Shenzhen is a beautiful and international city. It is in the south of China. It is famous for its wonderful scenery.

There are many morden buildings in the west of Shenzhen. If you like shopping, that would be a good place for choice, because there are many department stories. If you like foreign culture or buildings, to the world will be a good place to go. There are also many parks in the west of Shenzhen. I think the parks are wonderful places to visit, because you can see many beautiful flowers and tall trees. You can also enjoy the fresh air. You can also see the light show in Rencai Park, it even can light up the whole sky.

The east of Shenzhen lies on the coast. You can enjoy the seafood and sunshine, or swim in the sea here. It's a nice place for summer！

Shenzhen is a very good place to visit,why not visit Shenzhen this summer！

Shenzhen is Calling ---黄欣垟

Shenzhen is in the south of China. It has many places of interest such as the to the World. It includes a lot of mini landmarks in other countries. You can visit the department stores if you like shopping. One of the most popular places of interest in Shenzhen is the Happy Valley, this is the place that you can have fun.

Shenzhen is famous for its high-tech products. Tencent, Huawei and Baidu are all in Shenzhen. People work in those business and invent many products.

The climate in Shenzhen is quiet warm. Because of the climate, there are many kinds of animals, insects, birds and plants! You can visit Shenzhen in fall if you want. The weather in fall is really cool. You can do a lot of activities such as climbing and cycling.

Shenzhen has something for everyone, so why not visit Shenzhen this year?

Shenzhen is Calling ---严青雨

Shenzhen lies in the south of China. It is an international and modern city with a large population.

There are many famous tourist attractions. You can go
to the to the World if you visit Shenzhen, it is the landmark of Shenzhen. A lots of tourists like to go there. I suggest you to go there in the morning, because at this time of the day, there are few people in the to the World.

Shenzhen is a great place to go if you like shopping because there are many interesting and colourful department stores. As everybody knows, Shenzhen is famous for a large amount of high-tech products.

When night comes,there may be a light show. Hundreds of beautiful lights light up in every direction. I think it is a shocking sight.

Shenzhen has something for everyone, so why not visit Shenzhen next holiday?

Shenzhen is Calling ---詹思铄

Shenzhen is one of the most beautiful cities in China. It is situated in the south of China. Now let me introduce my hometown Shenzhen to you.

Shenzhen is an international city it has a large population. Exactly 20 million people live in Shenzhen. Over the years, the population of Shenzhen increases very fast. I think Shenzhen is a to the world. Shennan Road is the landmark here. lf you want to travel to Shenzhen, I can tell you where is the best place you should to go. That is the Happy Valley. There are many good equipments to play. Trust me, you will find many exciting things in this heaven for the players. The ticket only costs 200 yuan. After that, you may go to the Xianhu Park. It is the most famous attraction in Shenzhen. You will see many insects, birds, trees and so on. You can learn knowledge of Biology and feel natural beauty.

I must tell you the high-tech about Shenzhen. Shenzhen is famous for two companies. Tencent and Huawei. They are really cool and also excellent. If you want to go shopping, Coco Park is the place to go. When the night comes, buildings will light up in every direction.

Shenzhen has something for everyone, so why not visit Shenzhen this year?

Shenzhen is Calling ---仇俊昊

Shenzhen lies in the south of China. It is a very young and international city. It has a large population.

Shenzhen has a lot of famous tourist attractions. It attracts many tourists from all over the country every year. to the World is known as the landmark of Shenzhen. There are many big shopping malls in Shenzhen. It is very convnient for the visitors. You can find almost everything you need there. This city is also famous for its high technology. High-tech products are sold all over the world.

Shenzhen is a young city with many beautiful places. You can enjoy the light show in the Shenzhen Bay Park.You can't miss it.

We are proud of Shenzhen. It is our home. Why not visit Shenzhen this year. We are looking forward to your coming.

Shenzhen is Calling ---陈乐研

Shenzhen is in Southern China. It is a city with many beautiful places.

Nanshan is in the center of Shenzhen. Here are you will find many famous attractions such as the of the World. You can to to the South Mountain if you like the natural beauty. The oldest school in Nanshan is the Qilin Middle School. This is the place to go if you are a educator.

Shenzhen is very famous for its technology. There are many high-tech productions in this city and there are often some light shows at night. The light of the buildings lights up the sky.

The west of Shenzhen is famous for its wonderful farms. A quiet farm with thousands of flowers is the perfect palce to visit.

Shenzhen has something for everyone, so why not visit Shenzhen this year?



以上就是本次英语测验以Shenzhen is Calling为主题，大家创作出来的高分作文。并不是说他们的作文就是完美无瑕的，当然少不了一些小错误，我已做了修改，希望以上这些同学关注自己原文的一些小错误，认真订正，下次避免再出现同类错误。也希望其他同学在欣赏他们的文章的同时，去思考，去行动，勤练笔。你们当中，还有很多是写得相当不错的，期待你们写出更多的优秀作文，和大家一起分享。